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Commission- The Coolness of Night!

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Commission for Raichulolrat !
This really tested my background and shading abilities! I'm kinda pleased with the results, but it still isn't the best.
Storm: Wow, I never noticed how beautiful the night is!
Corrine: It's like this every night, you've just never took a moment to admire it!
This commission was 40 :points:!
Progress of this commission-
Free To Use Starry Nighttime Meadow Background by Princess-Corrine I'm sorry by Princess-Corrine Watching the Moon Rise - WIP by Princess-Corrine WIP- The Coolness of Night by Princess-Corrine WIP- The Coolness of Night! by Princess-Corrine 
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1920x1200px 1.25 MB
© 2014 - 2024 Princess-Corrine
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

A really nice piece! Over all, I think that you did good job on it, and I can see your art improving. Here's a few pieces of advice though:

o Make sure to review your anatomy a bit. I can tell you're still improving, but a few faulty things are the stallions front left hoof, it bends awkwardly. Other than that, looks pretty good! Keep improving.

o The moon is still a source of light, so make sure to try to make more of a glow from it. It's not BLINDINGLY bright at night, but you know what I mean. Nice lighting though!

o The grass goes too high where they're sitting. Think about an actual photo - would the grass go that high - EXCLUDING a hill - ? Probably not. If it is in a way a hill - my apologies! Other than that, nice! (TIP: A good way to show an effect of grass is to make some around their hooves, it shows a good way of them sitting in grass.)

Other than that, you did good on it! A lovely piece. Keep improving! Hope this helps, and I hope I wasn't too harsh on you or anything, haha! Good piece overall!